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clap for Tinkerbell

So I have this major goal to finish this current revision by the end of June aka 11:59 tonight. Because of my amazingly good behavior, I’ve decided to give myself an extension until 2 am. ((Kari, is that okay???? lol. I’m pretty sure I’m breaking the rules.))

So what I’m saying is, I’m going to be a bum today. I’m banning myself from commenting, lurking, reading, having fun, ANYTHING OTHER THAN REVISION. Well, I am going to work and stuff…and there’s that meeting…but lunch  and all other free time will be devoted to REVISION.

My bumship will last through the weekend, as well, bc I’M GOING OUT OF TOWN, BAYBAY. And all they have is dial up where I’m going.

So don’t forget that I exist or anything. That would be sad.

I’ll be back Monday!!!

AND if you really want to be nice, maybe you can leave me a little encouragement so I don’t feel so alone in my revision prison.

xoxo

Mlly

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i READ the GRAVEYARD BOOK

So the other day, Kari posted on larger than life characters via her reading in WRITING THE BREAKOUT NOVEL.

Yesterday, I finished a book portraying a larger than life character. So I thought I’d piggyback off of Kari’s thoughts and add my own, review-style.

I decided I had to read THE GRAVEYARD BOOK after pouring through Kate’s analysis of it (look around her site, she pulls out awesome aspects of the book over multiple posts).

Actually, I “read” this one by audiobook. I have to tell you, the experience was especially delightful because Neil Gaiman was the narrator.

What could be cooler that hearing a book read the way the author intended it????

Plus, I must add that Gaiman has this magical storyteller’s voice. He was created to tell tales.

Of course, the book gets to break all the rules. Hopping character perspective mid-narration. Following a character from infancy to adolescence. Noticeable (but wonderful) use of adverbs. The thing is, Gaiman does it masterfully, and I didn’t mind A BIT. (And, as Mary Kole says–geniuses can get away with this kind of behavior much easier than an aspiring writer can.)

The main character, Bod, is exactly the kind of person you want to root for, you want to follow around, you want to be. Even when he’s making a stupid decision, you know it will work out, because you know deep down that he has a good heart. He does things I’m not brave enough to do. He has talents I only wish I had. But he’s humble and kind, and I’m pretty sure we’re BFFs now.

I didn’t want the book to end. As I felt the narrative wrapping up, I caught myself pausing the story and finding all sorts of reasons to do something else.
Not because I was bored with the story.

BECAUSE I DIDN’T WANT IT TO END.

The biggest revelation this book offered me was its simplicity. The plot was straightforward. You could see every brick that built the tale. You knew where it was going. I enjoyed every delicious word of it. Each character was delightful and unique. For goodness sakes, I was sad to stop living in a graveyard!

And because I didn’t want it to end, even after it was over, I kept thinking about the story. How could something so beautiful and simple apply to my life? How can I hold on to the delight I felt in the narrative?

And then all of my graveyard memories came flooding back to me.
I learned to drive in a graveyard.
My friends and I would walk through it before youth group and talk about life.
We drove around it in the back of a truck on Halloween to scare ourselves, and my dad hid behind a tombstone and TERRIFIED us.
I used to (need to again) visit my aunt’s and my grandma’s graves and remember who they were.
We played football in the field that wasn’t yet full of graves.
It was one of those places where I learned that there are real people and there are fake people. And there are real people who act like fake people because they’re too afraid to be real.

All of which proves that this is truly a great book. Any book that can pull me through the above thought process gets a 20 out of 5 hearts from me.

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Peace

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Back to being a semi-professional writer

Apparently, this is an old prototype of the typewriter, the writing ball.
So I’m out of excuses. My new laptop is finally up and running with all of the documents from my old computer loaded onto its hard drive. I’ve got my favorite word-editor uploaded. I’ve found my place where I left off in my revisions.

Time to get back to work!

I stayed up until midnight working on my revisions.
I have to admit it.

I’ve missed this.

IBM Selectric. Just a step above my laptop. ha.

Sure, it was fun acting like a normal person for a few days. I played some really mind-numbing games and read some mind-blowing books.

Kissy-face and I gave up TV for a week and ate dinner listening to audio books. It was fantabulous.

But–Life feels kind of meaningless if you aren’t striving towards a dream. I know it for sure now; I write because I have to, because I love to, because I’m driven to.

I don’t care if it ever makes me money or proves that I have talent. (although, that would be nice, right?) I just love writing.

OMG this is the coolest looking thing ever. I want. My birthday is June 4th. Pleeeeeezzzeee.

It feels good to be back.

Wish me luck on my revisions. (I NEED IT!!)

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Peace

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